What’s Included?
✔️ Annotated review of your draft personal statement
✔️ Feedback on structure, flow, and clarity of your writing
✔️ Recommendations for reordering sections to create better flow
✔️ Flagging of overly complex sentences
✔️ Suggestions for enhancing reflections on clinical experience, use of self, diversity awareness, and ethical sensitivity
✔️ Identification of sections that lack sufficient reflection or personal insight
✔️ Highlighting of powerful moments that should be expanded or emphasised
✔️ Feedback on how well you demonstrate key competencies for the specific branch of psychology
✔️ Suggestions for more precise language and concrete examples
✔️ Help with striking the right balance between being professional and warm
✔️ Tips to avoid common pitfalls (e.g., overgeneralising, lack of cohesion)
✔️ 1x revision to receive follow up feedback
FAQ
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This service is designed for Clinical Psychology, Counselling Psychology, and other doctoral-level psychology training programmes. If you're applying to Educational, Forensic, or other programmes, contact me to ensure I can tailor feedback appropriately.
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Please provide:
Your draft personal statement
The specific programme(s) you're applying to
Any guidance/prompts provided by the university
Word count limits
Any specific concerns or areas where you'd particularly like feedback
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You'll receive your personal statement with detailed inline annotations. The service includes one revision round where you can resubmit your improved statement for follow-up feedback.
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To give you the most valuable review, your statement needs to be a complete draft before submission. This means:
A full document with all sections completed
Your best attempt at the content (even if you're not happy with it yet)
A previous statement you've submitted for another application
Any complete document you want feedback on for future applications
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Please submit as a Word document (.docx) so I can provide tracked changes and marginal comments throughout.
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Book your service → receive order confirmation with upload instructions
Send your document → within 24 hours of booking
I'll review it → delivered in 2-3 business days
Request any tweaks → you have 3 days to send an amended version
Receive final version → delivered within 1-2 business days
Please submit your documents within the deadline (24 hours) to secure your standard turnaround time.
If you miss the deadline:
Your review will still be completed, just on a longer timeline
Instead of 2-3 days, please allow for longer completion
I recommend having your documents ready before booking to ensure the fastest turnaround!
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Refunds are only available within 24 hours of booking. If you cancel the order after this time, no refund will be provided (see T&C’s).