Master's Personal Statement Review

What’s Included?

✔️ Annotated review of your draft personal statement

✔️ Feedback on structure, flow, and clarity of your writing

✔️ Recommendations for reordering sections to create better flow

✔️ Flagging of overly complex sentences

✔️ Guidance on deepening your discussion of clinical/research experience to demonstrate psychological insight and critical thinking

✔️ Identification of underdeveloped sections that lack sufficient reflection, personal insight, or connection to your motivations

✔️ Highlighting of powerful moments that should be expanded or emphasised

✔️ Suggestions for more precise language and concrete examples

✔️ Help with striking the right balance between being professional and warm

✔️ Tips to avoid common pitfalls (e.g., overgeneralising, lack of cohesion)

✔️ 1x revision to receive follow up feedback